Writing Journal

My new piece is about Gab and i choose to go back i guess to fill in the gaps of earlier pieces. I wanted to produce some thing that showed more of the bond that i wish Gab and Mills to have. I also noticed that i have to make a couple chapter doing this to make their friendship more authentic, along with other characters. In my new piece I wanted to show the growth of their friendship and the struggle they have telling eachother secrets as close friends. I'm still revising this and plan on adding more deatils to the settings. Like his bedroom and their work place. I believe that adding these types of chapters will pull my story together.